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[2023/10/28]ThechartbelowshowsthewaterlevelsinreservationsinsixcitiesinAustraliainOctober2009andOctober2010.

【主体段分段】：按照时间分段

【开头段】

ThebarchartcomparessixAustraliancitiesintermsofwaterlevelsofreservoirsinOctober2009andOctober2010.

【概述段】

Overall,Brisbanehadthehighestwaterlevelofreservoiramongallthecitiesinbothyears.Also,exceptthewaterlevelinSydney,thefiguresinalltheotherfivecitiesshowedarisingtrend.

思路要点：

-Brisbane的水库水位两年都最高

-除了Sydney，其他城市的水位都上升

【Body1】

In2009,thewaterlevelinBrisbanerankedthetopamongthesecities(98%),followedbythefigureinPerth(80%)andthatinMelbourne(78%).Bycontrast,thewaterlevelinDarwinwasthelowest(36%),whichwasroughlyhalfofthefigureinGoldCoast.

思路要点：2009年

-Brisbane水位排第一，Perth和Melbourne分别排名第二、第三

-Darwin水位最低，大约是GoldCoast的一半

【Body2】

Inthesubsequentyear,thereemergedamarginalgrowthby2%inthewaterlevelsofreservoirsinBrisbane,PerthandDarwin.ThewaterlevelsinMelbourneandGoldCoastalsoexperiencedanupwardtrend,withthefiguresrisingconsiderablyby5%.Bycontrast,Sydneywastheonlycitywherethewaterlevelofreservoirdroppedsignificantlyfrom44%in2009to40%in2010.

思路要点：2010年

-Brisbane,PerthandDarwin的水位小幅度上升

-Melbourne和GoldCoast的水位显著上升

-只有Sydney的水位显著下降